Monday, December 16, 2013
Sunday, December 15, 2013
Descriptive
Today I learn about descriptive the first thing when teacher came she told about animal.After she ordered told favorite pet with partner. Next she gave sheet description and tough us , when I will answer question I must to write my mapping (in my mapping share . What is it ? , where is find it ?, size? paraphgraph tell about?) cause it help easy to understand. I read paragraph about Komodo dragon they are very big and the prehistoric animal. Budapest is text about history and tourist attraction I think that beautiful and excellent. And Prague tell about the city of Prague and its uniqueness. they are amazing for me because I never see in my life. I like she tough me she dislike to use dictionary but she know we are sure word so she allow us to use it.
Problem in class is I learn every day I will sleep,but that is bad idea
Wednesday, December 11, 2013
Narratives
Last week I leaned about narratives I thing I used to leaned in Itinerary subject, I forgot. Teacher tough me such as narratives it same entertain , Types , Text Organisation in the Narrative usually begin. Next she gave new sheet short story "Secrets" by Tim Winton. In sheet have graph about habit such as I was often left alone , I like having secret etc. After she older I and partner swap I told about secret I told "I know everyone know" I think that is word fun for me. After she older us read story but she disallow search dictionary. First I read but I do not understood , so she and them read together. in story about Kylie she is a girl live with her mother and stepfather so she have problem in her life. I thing problem in class some word very difficult , when I don't know word I can't guess sentence and long passage.
Tuesday, December 10, 2013
Secret
Continuous from Secrets teacher older them told story about Secrets. Before she asked about homework after she older to share with partner After she ordered read story together and translate to us.
I dislike Kylie's mother because she don't care Kylie,
I dislike Philip because he hit Kylie and grad her love from her mother.
-Conflict between different generations. I think age important in family mother often girl is child and not interested her.
-Loneliness Children usually want lover and take care from family,but Kylie don't have that from mother cause her mother have new father and don't interested her.So she's alone.
- The well refer to mystical same habit Kylie.
- The photo refer to good memory and miss Kylie's father
- Kylie's cutting of the photo refer to she is angry something or not happy
The summary of part one
Kylie feels left out from her mother and Philip's activities. She became interested in the chickens in the yard. Somehow her secret helped her to feel lest lonely.She found a second egg and then found out where others were being laid by an unhealthy - looking hen.When her parent always go out home she happy and share secret with the hen. After she found the well she was forbidden to lift the lid due to it dangerous. Some afternoon she saw picture in photo album and miss her father but in picture not have father because he is took a photo.The summary of part two
Kylie watched the hen saton ten eggs and she took the lid of the well. Next she start to go down the well with her photo album every day and observe in picture her not saw camera .She watched Pilip and her mother and wanders why her father was not with them. Philip. Sometime she like to took album in well. But Philip discover her in well and hit her. She came back home,hit hen and throw it down the well, after she throw the chicks down the well. She chooses one special photo which made her feel good and cut off her head from the special photo and throw it away.in this story I fell
I like Kylie because she is a little girl she observe eggs and important she killed chick ,because I'm hate it.I dislike Kylie's mother because she don't care Kylie,
I dislike Philip because he hit Kylie and grad her love from her mother.
I think of this story are...
- Childrent's rights. I think children can be do every thing because they want to know ,care from family , attentiveness, etc , but Kylie' mother don't care her .-Conflict between different generations. I think age important in family mother often girl is child and not interested her.
-Loneliness Children usually want lover and take care from family,but Kylie don't have that from mother cause her mother have new father and don't interested her.So she's alone.
This story have many symbolic.In my opinion.
- The egg refer to toy or secret of Kylie.- The well refer to mystical same habit Kylie.
- The photo refer to good memory and miss Kylie's father
- Kylie's cutting of the photo refer to she is angry something or not happy
If I am Kylie I will throw Philip in well after I tell my mother "Pleas care me and I not find egg because it doesn't interest I will read books and sing a song."
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